Rewrite the sentences
from Task
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Consider using significant grammatical features
(Simple past tense, Temporal sequence and temporal conjunction, Specific
participants, Action verbs, Third person) as you may need to write longer sentences
and add extra information. Make sure you put the sentences chronologically.
Ir. Basuki Tjahaja Purnama, M.M
Ir. Basuki Tjahaja Purnama, M.M. was
born in Manggar, East Belitung, June 29, 1966; 52 years old. He is known as
Ahok. He is the Governor of DKI Jakarta who served from November 19, 2014 to
May 9, 2017. He is an Indonesian citizen of ethnic Chinese and the first
Protestant Christian who became Governor of DKI Jakarta.
On November 14, 2014, he was officially
announced to be the Jakarta Governor of successor Joko Widodo, through a
special plenary meeting at the DKI Jakarta DPRD Building. He was officially
appointed as Governor of DKI Jakarta by President Joko Widodo on November 19,
2014 at the State Palace, after previously serving as Acting Governor from
October 16 to November 19, 2014.
Since DKI Jakarta Governor Joko Widodo
took a sabbatical to become presidential candidate in the 2014 Indonesian
Presidential Election, Basuki Tjahaja Purnama was appointed as Acting Governor
of DKI Jakarta on June 1, 2014. After being elected in the 2014 Presidential
Election, 16 October 2014 Joko Widodo officially resigned as Governor of DKI
Jakarta. Automatically, Basuki becomes Acting Governor of DKI Jakarta. Basuki
continued his position as Acting Governor of the DKI Jakarta with the support
of Gerindra and PDIP, but after opposition to the Regional Election Bill he
lost support from Gerindra. While PDIP support was obtained from Deputy Governor
Djarot Saiful Hidayat. He then tried to advance again to become a Governor
Candidate through an (independent) path, but then decided to use a stretcher
from the party.
For improving performance and reducing
Corruption, Ahok also then held an auction for sub-district heads, village
heads and school principals whose targets were at least afraid that officials
from the provincial government would play better with the budget and public
services. Some of Ahok's efforts to overcome the flooding and at the same time
regulate the tidiness of the City of Jakarta such as; by cleaning the times of
garbage and moving the settlers of the Kali to several flats in Jakarta.
Finally, relocating residents who occupy state land in Kali Jodoh in a
high-rise house. He also managed to curb the Tanah Abang Market from street
vendors who had previously jammed the road. He also tried to build a cancer
hospital so that Indonesians would not go to Singapore if they had cancer.
Unfortunately, the plan didn't work because there were many obstacles and also
criticism from various parties.
On May 9, 2017, Basuki was sentenced to
two years in prison by the North Jakarta District Court judges for blasphemy.
In the prison, he also wrote a book called 'Ahok Policy' with the intention
that all the policies he had taken and thought of when becoming a public
official, could be valuable lessons for us to study and criticize together and
could be understood. In prison, he also had to accept the harsh reality of
having to part with his beloved wife Veronica Tan. On January 24, 2019, Basuki
was released from prison.
Checking your
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Elements
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Orientation
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Events
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Yes
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Reorientation
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Simple past tense
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Yes
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Temporal sequence and temporal conjunction
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Specific
participants
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Yes
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Action verbs
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Yes
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Third person
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Yes
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Sentences in
chronological order
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Yes
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